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©2008-2009 ~balazsfeher
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This picture was taken in an abandoned building, which has been closed for a long time. We had to crawl under the main gate to get in, but it worthed itself, I think.

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:icongilad:
I think the green outside is taking too much attention. I would rather focus the attention on the silhouette or the interior than the green outside

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:iconbalazsfeher:
Thank you :) as I said, I need the critique.

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:icondiiem:
wow, great concept! i really like it ^^
:icondesperate-bid:
hey, das Grundkonzept an dem Bild find ich echt hammer, die Farben sind auch klasse, da kommt der sommer draußen zum ausdruck.
ich würde allerdings raten das nächste mal nur die linke fensterwand auf das foto zu bekommen.. somit würde sich der rießen große "schwarze fleck" auf dem foto verkleinern und es hätte mehr stil

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Kár hogy dől , egyébként nagyon jó ké;p !
:iconbalazsfeher:
Danke :) übrigens, der große fleck hab ich da willentlich gelassen :)

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okay :)

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:iconalexiuss:
creative, but the outside is eating it up, because it's too bright compared to darkness of interior.
u should expose interior more and combine that with outside- that way you can have interior and outside looking nice and together, without breaking the image up too much

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